I was a real like picky about showing people my work i have done. Like one day ill sang or rap a song out of the top of my head i woul never wright i down because i was real scared that someboby would find my paper. I would be like man aint nobody bout to find this and i have something speeled wrong lol. Then i was like i need to write the things i say down becauae one day was doing something in my sixth grade year we had to make up a song it could of been extra credit, and so i just got to rapping stuff of the top of the done. People in the class was like dang that was tite and you know me im like yeah i know it was and i knew it that i didnt need to write it down, ok. We had to do it ok when i got in the class room this boy got up and said im going first so he did and i was like im going last because you know what they say the best goes last so. Ok this boy went up there and said my rap i got so mad at that boy i was about to fight him and i was telling the teacher tat he had took my rap and she said show me were you wrote it down at, but i didnt and she said oh well and i was like what. So i told myself that i was going to write my stuff down. But i really didnt know how to write untill i came to the highe school freshmen comp. mrs. adkins she helped me get better a writing and i really like making up stuff now so thats what i learned from not writing your things down it dont get u know were lol i really injoyed this class.

This is the story of my pen. When I am in that dark purse, it’s very hard to see where i’m going. Everytime I come out, i’m in new place. Sometimes it’s very hard because i’m thrown around or thrown at people. I’m sometimes in the trash. People are always using me. I get thrown into purses, backpacks, and lockers adn I never know where i’m going to end up at the end of the day.

One day we were on our way home from Georgia. My dad saw a river as we were on a bridge. So he decided to go to the river. We all ran out of the car and ran down beside it. It was such a hot day, so we took of our shoes and socks and went in. It was a cool, quiet river. We stuck our feet in and it was relaxing. We we wen to the middle of the river where there was sort of an island of rocks there. We just stood there looking at the bottom of it. I saw little fish and other things swimming in it. Soon, we had to leave because we had a long drive to get home. But it was so fun.

A-Aryona[[thats me]]

B-Brad

C-Cheerleading,Chris, Cody,Computer

D-Dad

E-Excitment[[lol]]

F-Friends

G-GHS

H-Halloween

I-Ice Cream

J-James,Jewlery

K-Kenya,Kohls

L-Laura

M-Music,Myspace,Mall

N-Ninth-Grade

O-Oreo Cookies

P-Puppies

Q-Quilt

R-River,Red

S-Sassy

T-TV

U-Unique

V-Volleyball

W-Wesley

X-???

Y-You-Tube

Z-Zack,Zoo

I hate the way he looked at me,
as if he really cared.
I don’t know why,
but all i could do was just stare and stare.
When i finally got him,
he looked away.
As if he had nothing to say.
I hate how he did this to me,
it was plain for everybody to see.
But now I’ve moved on,
I’m not going back.
I’m doing much better,
I’m on the right track

i fail a subject i get a D and i get a C put um together and you get 1100 yards of air mails…never had to do them before in my life before then..i never knew what they were..but i learned. i learned very well. and now i dont do them becouse i raised my grades

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listenin to the Doors and wondering what to do. play some games, watch some TV, get sumtin to eat. so i decide to get out my guitar and rock out some deep purple then some zepplin then some stevie ray voughn i get boared and set the guitar down and i want some more action so i go out and shoop some hoops…that how i get un boared wen im just sittin around

one of the greatest songs ever by stevie ray voughn

 goes a lil sumtin like this

“Well you’ve heard about love givin’ sight to the blind
My baby’s lovin’ cause the sun to shine
She’s my sweet little thing, she’s my pride and joy
She’s my sweet little baby, I’m her little lover boy

Yeah I love my baby, my heart and soul
Love like ours won’t never grow old
She’s my sweet little thing, she’s my pride and joy
She’s my sweet little baby, I’m her little lover boy

Yeah I love my baby, she’s long and lean
You mess with her, you’ll see a man gettin’ mean
She’s my sweet little thing, she’s my pride and joy
She’s my sweet little baby, I’m her little lover boy

Well I love my baby like the finest wine
Stick with her until the end of time
She’s my sweet little thing, she’s my pride amd joy
She’s my sweet little baby, I’m her little lover boy

Yeah I love my baby, my heart and soul
Love like ours will never grow old
She’s my sweet little thing, she’s my pride and joy
She’s my sweet little baby, I’m her little lover boy”

This is a story of a man who some people think is a mad man,a evil man, a monster but, after hours and years of interviews i have come to know the truth. He is simply a man trying to do good but is misguided, this is the story of a man named John Vilt the most famous vigilante to ever live, responsible for the extermination of not one, not two, but three major drug traficing gangs.The year was 1980, the the Greek and Irish/Russian familys have gone to war over midtown. With the Irish controll over Brokylen, The Ital

Friends are the people who will be there for you whenever you need them, they will help u up when u fall down.

They will Cheer you up when ur sad.

There the kind of people you can tell anything too and wont go run there mouth to anybody about it.

FIVE GOOD THINGS

1. i have a good family

2.My brother and sister look our for me

3.One of my step brothers hangs out with me alot

4.I get paid to do stuff

5.I can do what i want too on weekends

FIVE BAD THINGS

1.My brother is in navy and stationed in japan

2.I hardly ever see my sister

3.My mom wont let me get a job till im 16

4.I dont get to go anywhere during the week

5.Im stuck at home Mon-Friday unless church

I am Poem

I am Shane

Son of Mike and Heidi Eidlebach

Brother of Caleb Eidlebach

Who Loves workig out, Exercise, and good health

Who would like to see the “Paradise”, End of Dying, and using our brains with Perfection

Who fears dying, not knowing who to trust, and caring for those who you don’t know where they are

Who Hates men without respect to women, haughtiness, and ureasonableness

Who Dreams of one day the workd will have perfection,

Iveroune will understand Love,

And life will remain forever. . .

Perez

My letter of Reflection

This is my letter of reflection. My letter of reflection is about how my writing got better over the past semester.  I feel that my writing has gotten alot better sice I have started this class.  Since I have been in this class Mrs. Adkins has made us write alot.  At first my writing was as bad as the trash smells after christmas day when the garbage guys dont come for a few days after. Well anyways this class has been fun for me.  Brant keeping this class laughingfrom all the jokes and the constant smart alek comments.  Chuck with his story about the plunger and Mrs. Smiths class.  I used to hate writing but now i think i may reconsider it.  Mrs. Adkinshas opened a new door for me.  Hopefully my writing will continue to get better.  I hope one day i can become a writer on the side of my other career.  I use to hate this class but over time i learned to like it.  I hope that after this class i will have a better writing life time so i have someting to pass on to my children and my grand children.  That is how my writing has gotten better and how i feel about it.

One day i was talking on a cell phone and i heard a report on the News that said that they would microwave your brain.  I didn’t believe it then my head turned into a giant microwave.  Now I can cook food on the go.

One day I was walking down the road.  Imet a weird animal.  I took it home and it started to eat me.  Then I woke up

You know what I’m tired of…………you probably don’t…………and you probably don’t care, but Im not gonna let that stop me from speaking my mind. Let me start from what Im thinking right now.

1.    I’m tired of people commenting on their friends posts and not other peoples posts, for all you people out there who know you do that, I know that you like your friends and every thing…but try telling them the truth about their writings like my friend shane perez( try visiting his writings by the way) it might actually help them out.

2.  I’m also tired of the girls with their sob stories, love stories, and stories about their feelings. Just a word of advice: WRITE SOMETHING THAT PEOPLE WILL READ AND BE INTERESTED IN. i don’t want to be a meanie but we don’t care!!! girls realize this, the only reason why your “girlfriends” give a hoot about your feelings, is because they want to come to your house later and do nails and bake cookies with your mom.

3.   I’m really tired of not having enough time to write a good post, you know how Ms. Adkins always wants you to write in your journals or she wants to read something to you. It’s just never enough time to do anything anymore.

4. Also start commenting on things that haven’t been ccommented on, it might increase your chances of having your comment read and it makes people feel good that everything they wrote was read by someone.

I Am
The son of Sherrelle and Reggie
The brother of Orlando, Sydney, Andrew, and Jasmin
I love God, skittles, and chicken
Who wishes for a lot of success, money, and a good girlfriend
Who fears tall people lol
Who hates getting up, and annoying people
Who would like to see Paris, China, England
Who dreams of great things, to be a great basketball player

Because the princess cried one tear,
all the people cried all year.
Because the people cried all year,
they became very depressed.
Because they became very depressed,
they would not eat.
Because they would not eat,
they starved to death.
Because they starved to death,
the kingdom turned dark and dusk.
All because the princess cried one tear.

This symbol is everything. It is the symbol of all symbols to us. Its what we strive for. The colors that it has on it, everybody wears. It stands for our freedom and our indpendence. It is our Nation.

she super super monkey
WHY?
well her breath is mighty funky
she walk like a junky
she talk like a junky
she saying that she want me
but i said no
WHY?
well she eat off the floor
she asking me for more
im trying to igonor
but she is so eeewww! lol.
WHY?
she super super monkey

Many people over my lifetime have said that I am a good writer, but I have not completely agreed with them; I have considered myself a very average writer. Now that I have completed this Freshman Composition course, I have gained a considerable amount of confidence.

It was hard for me to keep up with my blog at first, but I started to take a liking to it. The comments that I received on my writings really changed my writing for the better. I also believe that just writing at all improve my writing style. I used to dread writing, but now I am extremely excited when an idea pops in my head. Now as soon as an idea pops into my head, I write it down and post it on my blog.

My writing style has also drastically changed. I used to just write fiction stories like the ones I read. Now, with the helpful criticism of my classmates, have expanded my writing into all sorts of categories from poetry to memoirs.

I feel that being able to read my pier’s work has helped me become a better writer as well. I am very glad that I had the opportunity to be a part of this new teaching style, and now I am a much better writer because of it.

I was reading a book when i looked up. There in the window i saw the most horrifying creature. It had blood dripping off of its lips. As soon as i seen it i knew exactly what it was but thats not nessicary right now.
So there i was sitting on the couch and it busted through my window. I got up adn ran as fast as i could, but i looked back and i couldnt see any thing so i slowed down and took a breath.
I went back to my house and it was gone so i figured it was my imagination. I woke up the next morning and found my mom and dad dangling from the celing fan. They had cuts all over them and there blood was every where. I was like man look at this mess my mom is going to make me clean this up then i was like oh yeah. I ran to my room and got my camera and took pictures to show the police.
My friends did not believe me that my parents had been killed by this monster. So i had two friends spend the night and they seen the monster adn so we ran again and this time it chased us until we got to a gas station. We brought a gas can and some gas with a one hundred dollar bill that we found on the ground. So we went back back to the house and went to sleep andwhen we woke up my friends decided to help me catch the monster. So we spent the whole day together preparing for this monster.
Well the monster showed up that night and it fell in to our trap which was the gas. I threw a match when he fell in the trap. His guts and brains went every where.

THE END

ONE TIME US YOUNGINS WERE GETTIN BORED WITH CHASEN THE PIG, SO WE DECIDED TO HAVE A LITTLE FUN. ALL OF US DONT LIKE TO NOT HAVE FUNN SO WE WENT SWIMMIN IN THE MUD HOLE. O BOY THAT SURE WAS THE FUNNEST OCCUPATIONAL ACTIVITY WE DID ALL SUMMER BUT SOMETHIN JUST WASNT RIGHT, AND I WASNT TALKIN ABOUT COUSIN CHUCK. WE NEEDED SOME MUSIC, THEN WE WOULD HAVE EVERYTHING; GIRLS PAINTED WITH MUD, “BEVERAGES”, AND JIMBO PLAYIN THE BANJO. IT SURE WAS A HOOT-A-NANY. THAT WAS THE BEST FAMILY REUNION EVER, IT GAVE ME MY MOST BEAUTIFULEST WIFE EVER, I HOPE MY OTHER SISTER DONT GET JELOUS.

i hate it when i do not have anything to write about its one of the worst things ever. I wish i all ways had something to write about because i need a lot of posts but i do not know what to write about. if you all could help me out that would be great thanks.

MARQUICE
SON OF DONNIE FRANKLIN AND TAMICA CARTWRIGHT
BROTHER OF CHASE FRANKLIN AND TRINA FRANKLIN
WHO LOVES BASKETBALL, CHICKEN, AND KOOL-AID
WHO FEARS SPIDERS, SNAKES, AND TORNADOES
WHO HATES HATERS, SPIDERS, AND TORNADOES
WHO WOULD LIKE TO SEE MICHAEL JORDAN, HOLLYWOOD, AND PARIS
WHO DREAMS TO BE IN DA NBA, TO BE A ENGINEER IF I CAN’T BE IN DA NBA, TO BE SOMEONE GREAT
CARTWRIGHT

Tra

Son of Bobby and Frances Alexander

The sister and brother of Laquila, Latisha, Rena, Steve, and Shawn

Who loves candy, girls, and clothes

Who wishes to be the richest man, beyonce, and Ashanti

Who fears snakes, bears, and fish

Who hates fish, bad smells, sadness

Who would I like to see Beyonce, Ashanti, and Rihana

Who dreams to be successful in college, go to the pros, and to get married

Alexander

Yea It5 wAt5 poppin.tHa bE5t cOl0r eVeR.iT 5hOw5 p0wEr aNd rOyaLity.m05t pE0pLe iN gH5 l0vE tHa c0l0r m0rE tHaN pLaIn 0lE bLue.rEd i5 aL0t m0re tHaN wHa+ i+ l00k5 lIke.yEa i kN0w iT l00k5 lIkE bL00d.bUt +heRe5 m0rE 2 I+.iT i5 tHa bE5t aNd n0 0+hEr. 

This past year my best friend,Amber Widdoes,moved to Livingston,TN. I was so sad. I miss her dearly, but we have to move on sometime. I did, but I still miss her. I love Amber. She was the awesomest friend ever. Until oneday…….I met lil Miss Simone Palmieri. She is just like Amber except one thing…….she’s a brunett.LOL! I love Simone so much sheislike a sister to me. I know that we haven’t known each other that long,but I trust her…….ALOT! I don’t know about her…….Victoria Moore might be her lil sis. I will always have her back even if we get into a fight, I will be there. If she gets into trouble, I will be by her side. There’s one more thing that I have to say before I close this station down. Simone Palmieri is a great friend, I love her, and she is sweet,kind,bad(LOL),and then Simone is someone that knows what to do when you’re down. If you’re reading this, I love you missy and don’t you worry I will be there for you threw the old and the new andno matter what.;) PROMISE! Don’t you ever forget it! Love ya girl!

Well I know that some kids don’t get to see their dad but me and my dad were really close. I Spent every weekend over his house, while I stayed with my mom during th week. When he went away to fight in the war with Iraq, I felt sad and I always wnodered what was going to happen to him, if he was going to come back or if I would never see him again.

In Freshmen Comp. Ms. Adkins showed us a picture and told us to write about it. The picture showed a man making a funny face. There were trailers all around him and there was a huge mudhole with a guy, in air, jumping into it. And here is mine.
“Overalls” just got out of the funny farm two days ago along with his friend Johnie. So, Johnie took “overalls” to this thing called “The Annual Mudhole Party.” Johnie entered the belly-flop competion, and that is why the picture looks the way it did.

It seems like it was just yesterday when the freshmen football players and I were helping the 6th, 7th, and 8th graders at Tidal Wave Camp. We had two scrimmages planned against Smyrna and Ravenwood. But they were cancelled. During the whole summer we had only one scrimmage and that was with Clarksville. We lost. It seemed like the season went by in a short week. Even though we went 1-6 overall in the season, with one winn against Hendersonville, I know we were better then all of the other teams. We were supposed to play Macon County for our last game, but they postponed the rest of their freshmen season, because all of their players were quitting. Coach Jackson called and E-Mailed a ton of teams trying to find someone that was willing to play us. But sadly, nobody was willing to play us for our last game.

Was there ever a house you lived by that you were scared of? That old creepy, gloomy figure on your street? As you walk by, the shadow of it seems to creep up to you, sending biting surges down your spine. You look at it. It’s. . . watching you, staring, never looking away. Your heart starts pounding like its trying to pop out you. You’re frightened. You run away, afraid of the house.

My mind is racing,
my heart is pacing.
The moment seems unreal.
Everything got quiet,
it was something I hadn’t seen before.
It was love knocking on my
front door.

This Girl
She is the reason why I come to school
This Girl
When I’m around her I try not to act a fool
This Girl
She makes me smile and got me wondering what I’m gonna say
This Girl
But most of the time the only thing that comes out is “Hey!”
This Girl
I really like her a lot
This Girl
I might stop talking to her Uhhhhhh maybe not lol
This Girl
Is someone I can trust
This Girl
Will not get left in the dust
This Girl
This Girl
This Girl

tinky winky, dipsy, and po
all went to the puppet show
hanging out at the hill house really stunk
so they went to the club, just to get krunk
po used his telemagic to get the ladies
tinky winky bought the drinks
and dipsy did his thing
they partied with all the women
and they went back home with a bang!!!!!!!

yo yo yo this is the most gangsta rap in the world
peace out shawty
I’m leaving now, whicky whicky wow
merry christmas to all the playas, but not for playas playing for the opposite team

TANiKA

Daughter of Tonja and Jerry Gater

Sister of Terri, Sabina, Jerry,Jerome, and Aron

Who loves Basketball, Lady Vols, and French Fries[[lol]]

Who wishes to met Candace Parker, successed in ife, and go pro

Who fears Spiders, Failure, and my future [[who knows what it could be]]

Who hates idiots, FLORIDA, and any one who thinks they’re better than anyone else

Who would like to just be happy

Who dreams of going pro in baskeball

Smith

Why does life have to be so unfair and strange sometimes? I love my life don’t get me wrong, but it can really be a pain in the butt. I mean I get up in the morning go to school, come home, eat, and go to bed. I real wish that my life had more excitement sometimes.

A- Allen
B- Baseball
C- Christ
D- Dog
E- Electric Slide
F- Farting
G- Gallatin
H- Hello
I- Igloo
J- Jo Jo
K- Kiana
L- Lasley
M- Michael
N- Nick
O- Octopus
P- Penelope
Q- QC
R- Ryan
S- Sonny
T- Tyler
U- Umbrella
V- Violin
W- Will
X- X-rays
Y- Yamaha
Z- Zebra

When you see the American Flag, you don’t see what certain people who have fanily members overseas do. When we look at it we see freedom, democracy, and Peace. But when they see the flag, they see their loved family members, they see themself holding the oncemore, or where they last spoke. They reacall all the good and fun times they used to share. They also worry about if they will ever see them again. This is what some, but not all people see in the American Flag.

Wheres your belt
Wheres your belt
You need a nice durable belt
If you do not have a nice durable belt
You will get some major D-time

One day in Coach Hall’s class we were all sitting there being little angels when all the sudden Coach Hall said class what is the best Cherry or Grape Kool-aid. Of course everyone said cherry was the best, but Coach Hall said class we all know the grape is the best. So now there was a class wide arguement. After it all seizes and there is now silence throughout the room, then Brandon Campbell breaks the silence and said Coach Hall we all know that cherry is the best though.

Before Coach Hall could argue back Martez Evrett makes his famous goat noise “eheheheheheheh”. Now the whole class is going crazy with laughter. Now Coach Hall is very mad so he says, “Brandon, Martez gather your books, go in the bathroom, tuck in yalls shirts, and go to the office. So they do wat there told but when Brandon was walking out Coach Hall noticed he had no belt. Then Coach Hall said, “Brandon where is your belt?” Brandon had no belt so he got some serious D-time. So we had another fun day in Coach Hall’s class.

A is for AutumnB is for BobbyC is for ChrisD is for DylanE is for EricaF is for FaithG is for GregH is for HeatherI is for IseyJ is for JimK is for KimL is for LeonaM is for MikeN is for NickO is for OfficerP is for PennyQ is for QuantrellR is for RobertS is for SamT is for TavorasU is for UncleV is for VanessaW is for WilliamX is for XzavierY is for YankZ is for Zane

Nothing to say
with nothing to do.
In room 304
it 35 til
So all i can do is chill
Still here
but now its only 25 til
thinking
hating this, pacing its all time really knows
but i just stay
Cant sleep or say a peep
Creep is all i do
cause if not ill have nothing to show when i go
So i pay close attention
to that little thing ticking
waiting on it to show
thats when it hits me
and 5 o’clock gets me

Im goen to write about school and what i do basically everyday.First i get up in the morning and take a shower.Then i put my clohes on and go outside to get on the bus.Then when its time after i go to school i go to first block.Then after first block i go to second.After secondi go to lunch.Then after lunch i go to 3rd then 4th.Then after the day is over i get on the bus and go home.So i think schol is really boaring.

our schools are held togetherand seem to be cleaneven though there is 1500 kids runnin aroundthey r unseenthey r unheardand little give them a thanksppl pass by them as they cleanand never does it occur to themthat without these ppl we call janitorsour school would be no more!

ppl always said we had free willppl always said we had freedom of speachppl said we ran our own liveswhat happened to thatevery day a student goes to schoolwe cant talk when we wantwe cant do what we wishwe dont do or go or lead our own livesour country is a democracy but or classesare a dictatorship and the teachers kno how to use that to there advantagethey tell us what to doand teach us what we need to knoto prepare us for our livesbut what good does it do if were locked up in a room all day?

ur a reatard so am iwe do some thingsthat make ppl give us the eyebut we dont carefor all we knois luv and passionto give off a show

spooks and kooks are out and aboutrunning around and radding the townthey give me the creeps and make chills quiver down my spinespooks and kooks are out and aboutso lock your doors and bolt them tightfor once a year they’ll give u a fright!